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Mary Sue Test: Diana
7 min read
Mary sue/Gary Stu test:
Character: Diana Belleve
Appearance
[X]They have a rare hair/fur colour (she dyes her hair)
[X]Their eyes are an unusual colour
[X]This happens to be red
[X] Their eyes change colour
[X] (if a female) they have large boobs
[X] (if a male) they are very muscular
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[X] They are very attractive to the same gender
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends
[X] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[X] They have a guardian spirit
[X] Some part of their body glows(that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race)
[X] They are emo/cutesy
[X] They have wings
[X] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[X] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
Total Y=0
Relations
[X] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[X] They have an evil nemesis
[X] Who is their sibling
[X] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[X] They are from a very rich/royal family
[X] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[Y] They have lost one/both of their parents
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[X] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[X] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[X] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[X] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[X] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[X] They never knew their parents
[X] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[Y]They are currently in a relationship (with Nahyuta)
Total Y=2
Race/Species
[X] They are possessed by an angel
[X] They are possessed by a demon
[X] But they struggle to be good anyway
[X] They are a mythical creature
[X] They are an alien
[X] They are part mythical creature
[X] They are part alien
[X] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[X] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[X] And they grew up thinking they were human
[X] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Total Y=0
Powers
[X] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[X] They have a special ability/power
[X] But they don't know about it yet
[X] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[X] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[X] They are immortal(cannot be killed by conventional means)
[X] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[X] They have a 'special type' of soul
[X] Their soul is not the same as them
[X] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Anyone can talk TO spirits; it's getting them to talk back that is the hard part)
[X] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[X] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Total Y=0
Mentality
[X] They have a mental disorder
[X] They have an emotional disorder
[X] They struggle to stay sane
[X] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[X] They are a psycho
[X] They have multiple personalities(x2 if this is shown to be funny)
[Y] They are very intelligent
[X] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[X] They have hallucinations
[X] They are very mysterious/dark
[Y] They are very lively/happy
[Y]Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[X] They are very patient
Total Y=3
Miscellaneous
[Y] They are physically strong
[X] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[X] They have a rare/unusual name
[X] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[X] They are connected with a certain element
[X] They are connected with a certain animal
[X] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[X] They are hiding from someone/something
[X] They have a rare blood type
[X] They cry blood
[Y] They are from a different country to where they live
[X] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[X] They come from two such lines
[X] Which have been at war for all of history
[X] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way (my god, I can't count how many time I've seen this)
[X] They have amnesia
[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[X] The have a curse upon them
[X] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[X] They are 'the chosen one'
Total Y=2
Total: 7 points
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[X] They smoke
[X] They are an alcoholic
[X] They are overweight
[X] They are addicted to drugs
[Y] They have a short temper
[X] They enjoy bullying others
[X] They do not care much about others
[X] They are emotionless
[X] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[X] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 1
Final Total: 6 points
<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15 -Balanced Character (Diana is in this category)
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.
26> -Mary-Sue
This is not a definitive test: with all the variety of people there are, a character could very well score a 26 on this and not a Mary-Sue; but these are all things that Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus tend to have in common, so if your character scores high on this test, it is likely(not definite, but likely) that said character is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu
This was really fun, I suggest you guys try this test out for you OCs.
[X] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[X] They have an evil nemesis
[X] Who is their sibling
[X] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[X] They are from a very rich/royal family
[X] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[Y] They have lost one/both of their parents
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[X] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[X] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[X] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[X] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[X] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[X] They never knew their parents
[X] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[Y]They are currently in a relationship (with Nahyuta)
Total Y=2
Race/Species
[X] They are possessed by an angel
[X] They are possessed by a demon
[X] But they struggle to be good anyway
[X] They are a mythical creature
[X] They are an alien
[X] They are part mythical creature
[X] They are part alien
[X] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[X] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[X] And they grew up thinking they were human
[X] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Total Y=0
Powers
[X] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[X] They have a special ability/power
[X] But they don't know about it yet
[X] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[X] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[X] They are immortal(cannot be killed by conventional means)
[X] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[X] They have a 'special type' of soul
[X] Their soul is not the same as them
[X] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Anyone can talk TO spirits; it's getting them to talk back that is the hard part)
[X] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[X] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Total Y=0
Mentality
[X] They have a mental disorder
[X] They have an emotional disorder
[X] They struggle to stay sane
[X] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[X] They are a psycho
[X] They have multiple personalities(x2 if this is shown to be funny)
[Y] They are very intelligent
[X] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[X] They have hallucinations
[X] They are very mysterious/dark
[Y] They are very lively/happy
[Y]Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[X] They are very patient
Total Y=3
Miscellaneous
[Y] They are physically strong
[X] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[X] They have a rare/unusual name
[X] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[X] They are connected with a certain element
[X] They are connected with a certain animal
[X] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[X] They are hiding from someone/something
[X] They have a rare blood type
[X] They cry blood
[Y] They are from a different country to where they live
[X] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[X] They come from two such lines
[X] Which have been at war for all of history
[X] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way (my god, I can't count how many time I've seen this)
[X] They have amnesia
[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[X] The have a curse upon them
[X] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[X] They are 'the chosen one'
Total Y=2
Total: 7 points
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[X] They smoke
[X] They are an alcoholic
[X] They are overweight
[X] They are addicted to drugs
[Y] They have a short temper
[X] They enjoy bullying others
[X] They do not care much about others
[X] They are emotionless
[X] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[X] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 1
Final Total: 6 points
<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15 -Balanced Character (Diana is in this category)
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.
26> -Mary-Sue
This is not a definitive test: with all the variety of people there are, a character could very well score a 26 on this and not a Mary-Sue; but these are all things that Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus tend to have in common, so if your character scores high on this test, it is likely(not definite, but likely) that said character is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu
This was really fun, I suggest you guys try this test out for you OCs.
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Mary Sue Test: Kayla
7 min read
Mary sue/Gary Stu test:
Character: Kayla Belleve
Wrong/Nope=X
Correct/Right=Y
Let's Begin!
Correct/Right=Y
Let's Begin!
Appearance
[X]They have a rare hair/fur colour
[X]Their eyes are an unusual colour
[X]This happens to be red
[X] Their eyes change colour
[X] (if a female) they have large boobs
[X] (if a male) they are very muscular
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[X] They are very attractive to the same gender
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends
[X] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[X] They have a guardian spirit
[X] Some part of their body glows(that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race)
[X] They are emo/cutesy
[X] They have wings
[X] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[X] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
Total Y=0
Relations
[X] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[X] They have an evil nemesis
[X] Who is their sibling
[X] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[X] They are from a very rich/royal family
[X] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[X] They have lost one/both of their parents
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[X] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[X] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[X] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[X] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[X] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[X] They never knew their parents
[X] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[Y]They are currently in a relationship (with Edward Nigma)
Total Y=1
Race/Species
[X] They are possessed by an angel
[X] They are possessed by a demon
[X] But they struggle to be good anyway
[X] They are a mythical creature
[X] They are an alien
[X] They are part mythical creature
[X] They are part alien
[X] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[X] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[X] And they grew up thinking they were human
[X] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Total Y=0
Powers
[X] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[Y] They have a special ability/power (Insect Powers)
[X] But they don't know about it yet
[X] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[Y] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift (Can grow butterfly wings)
[X] They are immortal(cannot be killed by conventional means)
[X] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[X] They have a 'special type' of soul
[X] Their soul is not the same as them
[X] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Anyone can talk TO spirits; it's getting them to talk back that is the hard part) (he can only see them, hear them but can't really communicate)
[X] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[X] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Total Y=2
Mentality
[X] They have a mental disorder
[X] They have an emotional disorder
[X] They struggle to stay sane
[X] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[X] They are a psycho
[X] They have multiple personalities(x2 if this is shown to be funny)
[Y] They are very intelligent
[X] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[X] They have hallucinations
[X] They are very mysterious/dark
[Y] They are very lively/happy
[Y]Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[Y] They are very patient
Total Y=4
Miscellaneous
[X] They are physically strong
[X] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[X] They have a rare/unusual name
[X] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[X] They are connected with a certain element
[X] They are connected with a certain animal
[X] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[X] They are hiding from someone/something
[X] They have a rare blood type
[X] They cry blood
[X] They are from a different country to where they live
[X] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[X] They come from two such lines
[X] Which have been at war for all of history
[X] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way (my god, I can't count how many time I've seen this)
[X] They have amnesia
[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[X] The have a curse upon them
[X] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[X] They are 'the chosen one'
Total Y=0
Total: 12 points
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[X] They smoke
[X] They are an alcoholic
[X] They are overweight
[X] They are addicted to drugs
[X] They have a short temper
[X] They enjoy bullying others
[X] They do not care much about others
[X] They are emotionless
[X] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[X] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 0
Final Total: 7 points
<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15 -Balanced Character (Kayla ended up in this category)
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.
26> -Mary-Sue
This is not a definitive test: with all the variety of people there are, a character could very well score a 26 on this and not a Mary-Sue; but these are all things that Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus tend to have in common, so if your character scores high on this test, it is likely(not definite, but likely) that said character is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu
This was really fun, I suggest you guys try this test out for you OCs.
[X] Some part of their body glows(that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race)
[X] They are emo/cutesy
[X] They have wings
[X] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[X] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
Total Y=0
Relations
[X] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[X] They have an evil nemesis
[X] Who is their sibling
[X] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[X] They are from a very rich/royal family
[X] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[X] They have lost one/both of their parents
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[X] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[X] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[X] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[X] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[X] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[X] They never knew their parents
[X] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[Y]They are currently in a relationship (with Edward Nigma)
Total Y=1
Race/Species
[X] They are possessed by an angel
[X] They are possessed by a demon
[X] But they struggle to be good anyway
[X] They are a mythical creature
[X] They are an alien
[X] They are part mythical creature
[X] They are part alien
[X] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[X] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[X] And they grew up thinking they were human
[X] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Total Y=0
Powers
[X] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[Y] They have a special ability/power (Insect Powers)
[X] But they don't know about it yet
[X] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[Y] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift (Can grow butterfly wings)
[X] They are immortal(cannot be killed by conventional means)
[X] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[X] They have a 'special type' of soul
[X] Their soul is not the same as them
[X] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Anyone can talk TO spirits; it's getting them to talk back that is the hard part) (he can only see them, hear them but can't really communicate)
[X] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[X] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Total Y=2
Mentality
[X] They have a mental disorder
[X] They have an emotional disorder
[X] They struggle to stay sane
[X] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[X] They are a psycho
[X] They have multiple personalities(x2 if this is shown to be funny)
[Y] They are very intelligent
[X] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[X] They have hallucinations
[X] They are very mysterious/dark
[Y] They are very lively/happy
[Y]Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[Y] They are very patient
Total Y=4
Miscellaneous
[X] They are physically strong
[X] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[X] They have a rare/unusual name
[X] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[X] They are connected with a certain element
[X] They are connected with a certain animal
[X] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[X] They are hiding from someone/something
[X] They have a rare blood type
[X] They cry blood
[X] They are from a different country to where they live
[X] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[X] They come from two such lines
[X] Which have been at war for all of history
[X] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way (my god, I can't count how many time I've seen this)
[X] They have amnesia
[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[X] The have a curse upon them
[X] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[X] They are 'the chosen one'
Total Y=0
Total: 12 points
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[X] They smoke
[X] They are an alcoholic
[X] They are overweight
[X] They are addicted to drugs
[X] They have a short temper
[X] They enjoy bullying others
[X] They do not care much about others
[X] They are emotionless
[X] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[X] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 0
Final Total: 7 points
<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15 -Balanced Character (Kayla ended up in this category)
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.
26> -Mary-Sue
This is not a definitive test: with all the variety of people there are, a character could very well score a 26 on this and not a Mary-Sue; but these are all things that Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus tend to have in common, so if your character scores high on this test, it is likely(not definite, but likely) that said character is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu
This was really fun, I suggest you guys try this test out for you OCs.
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Road to Ninja One Piece
2 min read
Dammit, SuperSaiyanCrash, you art is giving me ideas!
Road to Pirate: A One Piece Twist on Road to Ninja, a Naruto Shippuden movie
Story: After a fight with a pirate crew, Robin has been knocked into a deep coma. But what the others don't know is that the guy who knocked her out used a devil fruit.
That brings her to a illusion world that's wacked up!
In this world, Robin's mother and giant friend never died, along with Ohara, being that the residents were respected marines. So now, Robin is one herself, with the rest of the crew too and marines now practically rule the seas!
Robin doesn't know what to do, but when the guy who sent her here appears with a more powerful and pirate CP9, she has to make a choice: her family... Or her dream.
Other world cast:
Luffy: Met Akainu instead of Shanks, which convinced him to become a marine instead, with a marine cap in place of the straw hat. He's a lot more serious than his other counterpart, and now a golden boy.
Zoro: Kuina never died and is an officer with him. They bicker a lot, but are training under Mihawk to one day beat him. Zoro is a lot more peppy, but still has a lost sense of direction.
Usopp: Bachina never died and Yasopp was a member of the marines. Usopp is now very brave and not a liar, but can be impulsive.
Nami: Never lost Bellemare and grew up following her mothrer's footsteps. Is now actually very generous, but still short tempered.
Sanji: Zeff was a former marine chef. Is still a lady wanter, but gets along with Zoro.
Chopper: Dr. Hirluk was a respected marine who never passed away. Still retains personality, but now takes compliments the right way.
Franky: Never lost Tom, who is now a legendary marine, and is still human with instead a robotic suit. Still says super, but flirts with Robin a lot.
Brook: Was part of a marine crew in his younger days. He plays a marine song instead, and is now a serious guy instead of a pervert.
Road to Pirate: A One Piece Twist on Road to Ninja, a Naruto Shippuden movie
Story: After a fight with a pirate crew, Robin has been knocked into a deep coma. But what the others don't know is that the guy who knocked her out used a devil fruit.
That brings her to a illusion world that's wacked up!
In this world, Robin's mother and giant friend never died, along with Ohara, being that the residents were respected marines. So now, Robin is one herself, with the rest of the crew too and marines now practically rule the seas!
Robin doesn't know what to do, but when the guy who sent her here appears with a more powerful and pirate CP9, she has to make a choice: her family... Or her dream.
Other world cast:
Luffy: Met Akainu instead of Shanks, which convinced him to become a marine instead, with a marine cap in place of the straw hat. He's a lot more serious than his other counterpart, and now a golden boy.
Zoro: Kuina never died and is an officer with him. They bicker a lot, but are training under Mihawk to one day beat him. Zoro is a lot more peppy, but still has a lost sense of direction.
Usopp: Bachina never died and Yasopp was a member of the marines. Usopp is now very brave and not a liar, but can be impulsive.
Nami: Never lost Bellemare and grew up following her mothrer's footsteps. Is now actually very generous, but still short tempered.
Sanji: Zeff was a former marine chef. Is still a lady wanter, but gets along with Zoro.
Chopper: Dr. Hirluk was a respected marine who never passed away. Still retains personality, but now takes compliments the right way.
Franky: Never lost Tom, who is now a legendary marine, and is still human with instead a robotic suit. Still says super, but flirts with Robin a lot.
Brook: Was part of a marine crew in his younger days. He plays a marine song instead, and is now a serious guy instead of a pervert.
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Story for Ninja Piece
1 min read
Naruto/One Piece crossover.
Summary: We all know Sanji got sent to his own personal hell, but what if instead of spending time with okama, he's stuck living with a certain ninja in a village that doesn't even know about pirates?
Saga 1: Landing
Saga 2: Ninja
Saga 3: Pirate
Saga 4: War
Summary: We all know Sanji got sent to his own personal hell, but what if instead of spending time with okama, he's stuck living with a certain ninja in a village that doesn't even know about pirates?
Saga 1: Landing
Saga 2: Ninja
Saga 3: Pirate
Saga 4: War
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Chaos Chornicles
2 min read
Secret Freedom: Now part of the Secret Freedom Fighters, Silver tries to work with his new group to save the Kingdom from the wizard's clutches.
Hedgehog in Love: On a mission with Sonic, they soon meet up with Blaze, who is getting closer to finding all of the Sol Emeralds, and right now being followed by. Eggman Nega. However, Silver can't help but feel he met her somewhere before...
A Rose with Thorns: When the Nocturnus team up with Finitevius, rebel Shade joins up with the Chaotix to stop him. Meanwhile, Amy might be learning to finally get over Sonic...
Crisis from the Underground: When Underground Mammoth Mogul takes over, Sonic goes to the Underground Zone to stop him.
Curse of the Black Arms: The Black Arms have finally arrived, leaving all Freedom Fighters along with G.U.N. to team up together to hold back the army while the others try to grab the other Chaos Emeralds. Meanwhile, Shadow tries to face his own past when Black Doom shows him a hedgehog girl who looks like Maria, who want him to join the Black Arms!
Sides of a Coin: An injured Fiona suddenly appears asking for help in Freedom Fighters HQ, saying that Scourge has finally lost it. Stuck with Team Babylon and Hooligan (plus Nic) as backup, Sonic may have trouble as he deals with the uncertainty of Fiona being good!
Never Apart: Memories of the mysterious Solaris resurfacing, Mephiles the Dark returning, and our hedgehog trio finally realizing they've grown close. Need I say more?
Hedgehog in Love: On a mission with Sonic, they soon meet up with Blaze, who is getting closer to finding all of the Sol Emeralds, and right now being followed by. Eggman Nega. However, Silver can't help but feel he met her somewhere before...
A Rose with Thorns: When the Nocturnus team up with Finitevius, rebel Shade joins up with the Chaotix to stop him. Meanwhile, Amy might be learning to finally get over Sonic...
Crisis from the Underground: When Underground Mammoth Mogul takes over, Sonic goes to the Underground Zone to stop him.
Curse of the Black Arms: The Black Arms have finally arrived, leaving all Freedom Fighters along with G.U.N. to team up together to hold back the army while the others try to grab the other Chaos Emeralds. Meanwhile, Shadow tries to face his own past when Black Doom shows him a hedgehog girl who looks like Maria, who want him to join the Black Arms!
Sides of a Coin: An injured Fiona suddenly appears asking for help in Freedom Fighters HQ, saying that Scourge has finally lost it. Stuck with Team Babylon and Hooligan (plus Nic) as backup, Sonic may have trouble as he deals with the uncertainty of Fiona being good!
Never Apart: Memories of the mysterious Solaris resurfacing, Mephiles the Dark returning, and our hedgehog trio finally realizing they've grown close. Need I say more?
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